Trying to capture Xan

When I drew this the side on view came out fine. Bu then I suddenly couldn't draw male faces at all. I must have sketched the front view about 10 times before giving up leaving this front version that looks more like a young Xan. With the 3/4 view I like the bottom half of his face, but I think his eyes mess the face up.

Anyway, Xan is from the Baldur's Gate game, bla bla bla.